The Missing Bag and Notebook

Malo e lelei everyone, I am looking forward to seeing you read my INTELLIGENT! story.

One day there lived a young girl called Sarah. Sarah was very excited about school, but she hopes that tomorrow the teachers are nice, she hopes she won’t get lost and she hopes that school will be FUN!. The next day Sarah packed her stuff, and walked to school, after her old friends showed up, they promised each other that they are gonna go to the same school, so Sarah sat down on the green grass got her bag unzipped it and took out her notebook to write down the stuff that she was doing until her friends called her to hurry and come so they can play a game. Sarah was excited so she put down her notebook and ran to her friends to play until a teacher in her class came out to check on the kids. When she took a step forward she saw Sarah’s notebook and her bag so she took it and put it in her class in case it belonged to someone in her class. When Sarah and her friends came back, Sarah saw nothing on the ground except for the short and long green grass. So one of Sarah’s friends said “It’s okay Sarah well go inside the school and look in all the classes if your notebook and your bag is there?” So Sarah said “Okay then, well go and have a look inside.” So Sarah and her friends went inside the school to look for Sarah’s bag and her notebook.

Then, they went to the first class they to is the Art room, asked the art teacher if they can have a look around for Sarah’s bag and her notebook, so the teacher said “Yes you can have a look around my class?” and Sarah said “Thank you Mr. Williams.” So the girls had a look around the Art room but while they were looking around one of them said “It would fun painting pictures but we can’t find Sarah’s bag and her notebook, all we can see is the Art supplies.” Then they went to the lunch room and asked the lunch teacher if they can have a look around the room if Sarah’s bag and her notebook is there. So they had another look around the kitchen for Sarah’s bag and her notebook. Then Sarah said “Thank you Mr.Bryan for letting us have a look around the the room but I can’t find my bag and my notebook it’s only the tables, chairs and the foods.

Last of all, Sarah and her friends went to the library and asked the library teacher if they can have a look around her library if Sarah’s notebook and her bag is there. So when they had their last look Sarah’s notebook and her back wasn’t there until the bell rang. The librarian teacher said that they’re supposed to go to class before they get in trouble. So Sarah was so upset because they didn’t get time to find her notebook, until a huge surprise showed up Sarah’s teacher stood in front of her and said “Does this belong to you?” then Sarah was so happy and said “Yes! That is mine thank you very much?” Then her teacher gave her notebook and her bag back and said “You're welcome.”

Finally, Sarah took care of her stuff and never lost it again.